Can I get some opinions? I'd considered going back through MDJ and making a few changes- things like switching in English names where (bad) Japanese was used initially, clearing up ambiguities, making Heath's fortune-telling session less awful.... The idea would be to sort of sharpen my writing skills in preparation for returning to actual writing, as I imagine I'm quite rusty. Is there interest in me doing it, and would there be any interest in preserving the original as-written versions?
This would not be a total overhaul. I've tried that behind the scenes, and while I think the end result worked reasonably well, if I did this, I'd basically have to start the story over, which I am very not interested in doing. The tone and events are differnt enough for much of the story to feel rather different. If I wound up doing a second go at the story, it would be after the story has finished. This, meanwhile, would just be small quality-of-life updates.
So, opinions?